How about substituting the word Dhamma without changing what the author relates?

Her paragraph:

  When you see change in the body, change in feelings, and change in the mind, this is called seeing the Dhamma, i.e. seeing inconstancy.  You have to understand this correctly.  Practicing the first tetrad of breath meditation contains all four tetrads of breath meditation. In other words, you see the inconstancy of the body and then contemplate the mind.  The mind, too, is inconstant.  This inconstancy of the mind is the Dhamma.  To see the Dhamma is to see this inconstancy.

Substitution:

  When you see change in the body, change in feelings, and change in the mind, this is called seeing the continuous mandatory alterations of physical substance, i.e. seeing inconstancy.  You have to understand this correctly.  Practicing the first tetrad of breath meditation contains all four tetrads of breath meditation. In other words, you see the inconstancy of the body and then contemplate the mind.  The mind, too, is inconstant.  This inconstancy of the mind is the evidence of ephemeral of mindstuff.  To see this ever-changing feature is to see this inconstancy.